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THE GAME : CHAPTER TWO : FEELINGS

Author: Indri AKA Sakura_bloom AKA Vanity_Above
Title: THE GAME
Pairings: YunJae / YooSu [expect the unexpected]
Ratings: NC 17 [OMG 0_0] just to be safe.
Length: 2 /?
Genre: Angst, romance, fluff, smex (//0_0//)
Summary:

Each and everyone of them would have moaned louder, complained better, moved faster, if they had known the dangers the game could come forth with. If they had known, there are things better kept as secrets, desires better remained as fantasies, places better stayed unexplored, words better left untold and pleasures better off unknown.

Only if they had known.

Obviously

They didn't know.

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THE GAME : PROLOGUE :
http://vanity-above.livejournal.com/7212.html#cutid1

THE GAME : CHAPTER ONE : LET THE GAME BEGIN
http://vanity-above.livejournal.com/7645.html#cutid1

THE GAME : CHAPTER TWO : FEELINGSCollapse )

A/N
GUYS <3 OMG the comments are love, my writing gets faster and better with your comments <3
I hope you guys like this chapter and like always
COMMENTS ARE L.O.V.E
[I'm such a comments whore -_-"]
LOVE YOU GUYS <3 <3 <3

Comments

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yoosulover89
Jan. 3rd, 2009 04:30 pm (UTC)
Omoooo, so something 'did' happen between Yoosu, right??? Aww, I feel for Susu since Chun gives him the cold shoulder, but it's to early to make assumptions. I have to keep on reading. xD
Thanx for the fast update!! <333
ime08
Jan. 3rd, 2009 05:19 pm (UTC)
0mmo! It started! lol But poor Jae though~ Yun have yoona beside Jae D: Btw thanx updated ne :D
twiglet71
Jan. 3rd, 2009 06:02 pm (UTC)
Just caught up with this fic.....very interesting. Denial flying about everywhere. Great fic looking forward to the next update xxx
ladian
Jan. 3rd, 2009 06:19 pm (UTC)
Woah, I'm still amazed with this fic O___O
But... Chunnie TT__TT Poor Su doesn't deserve it D:
I can't wait to see how it goes :DD
So comments make you go faster?
Then I'm glad I've commented ^^
I'll send inspiration to you, hney~!
padmik
Jan. 3rd, 2009 06:51 pm (UTC)
YOOCHUN YOU BASTARD. -stomp- Poor Junsu :(

-cheers for YunJae-
jaesa2617
Jan. 3rd, 2009 06:58 pm (UTC)
the yoosu here is so sad!! poor su! give him to me!!!! and i tink yunnie has an underlying affection for jae HAHAHHAHAH.
irerd_taga
Jan. 3rd, 2009 07:59 pm (UTC)
Oh my...Yunjaesu's dares were so risque while Yoochun's was so tame!
Really Yoochun, kiss and cuddle?!
And what happened between Yoosu? Did something sexual occur between them before and that's why Yoochun hates Junsu now?
Yunho's puzzled about Jae's recent avoidance. Why do I get the feeling that Jae likes Yunho as more than a best friend?
ice12345
Jan. 3rd, 2009 09:45 pm (UTC)
this is great!...well too bad, i was thinking that yoochun will write some crazy nc17...like spanking or wipping heheh something like that :p
cont wait for the next part
dans711
Jan. 3rd, 2009 09:51 pm (UTC)
"kiss and cuddle"? i dont know about u guys but i think it's really the hardest one...why?
coz one of the rule says no love involve right? and as far as i know kiss and cuddle is the most romantic thing about sex right? so am afraid they ganna lose by falling in love!
no? <.<
behan_yang
Jan. 4th, 2009 12:11 am (UTC)
wonderful chapter so far...very amusing and it does nothing but fuel my imagination more...*wink*

hahaha...yunho is just too adorable and oblivious of everything..."Because best friends need their daily dose of intimacy too right? And that is absolutely normal right?"...right, yunho whatever you may think...*wink*...but seriously...not know what's more than sex...any guy with a heart should know that answer...i guess that means jaejoong has a heart...and i think i see a heart break in his future...but only for a little but though...because it is going to be a happy ending...*hint hint*

hahaha...yoochun seriously that was just waaay too cute...i thought yoochun was going to be the devil and write something more...hahahaha...i guess it shows how innocent yoochun is...

ohhh...i think i may get the reason why yoochun hates junsu...so junsu confessed to yoochun...and yoochun rejected him and start hating him for it...nice move yoochun...(note the sarcasm)

hwaiting Junsu-ah...i know he will end up as the winner between YooSu...i am totally rootng for him...

can't wait to read the next chapter...please update soon!

ittyluvyunjae
Jan. 4th, 2009 01:29 am (UTC)
Yippy update again!!! *jumps around*
what!?You're 16?Ow...So i can't call you unnie,..Hehe
i am 17 y.o... I call You indri then,hehe...
Yes you right, i am indonesian....
Umm, can i speak in indo in here?? *looking around*

ow yeah i forget...
Let's go to the story...
Wow the game was begin...Haha... At first i thought yuchun will give a very bad challenge to yunjae,but....-_-' he just order to kiss and cuddle...Thats all,ckckck
he is so pure innocent or pure stupid? -_-"

aw so sweeeet... Yunjae so adorable....^^ yunho wont let go of jae... He keep jae in his lap like baby, aw aw so sweet.... So romantic
the romatic of yunjae surely can make me fly.... *what the connection?* *forget it*
hmmm....Before this game yun and jae have a relationship more that a friend? So they so close more than yoosu....
Omo so jae ever give yunho blowjob?Wow wow wow...
I hope they will together
but but if they fall in love to each other they will lose the game?? Aw...For me just keep yunjae always together *pray in the corner*

O yeah why yoochun so mean toward junsu? He doest understand junsu's feeling,.. Poor junsu...
Please update again...Please please please^^
lunatunalover
Jan. 4th, 2009 02:06 am (UTC)
Ahaha! The Yunjae were both adorable AND snarky... I loved it! <3 *squishes you* Although Yoochun just makes me sad cause he's being such a jackass... but I'm sure he'll come around eventually. He's just having homophobia and self-acceptance issues *nods* And Yunnie is clueless..he doesn't realize he likes Jae a bit too much to just be 'normal' for best friends aaaand he has no idea Jae likes him! Admittedly, this is just me theorizing ^^;; But yeah, I love it and can't wait to see more!
victoria7130
Jan. 4th, 2009 05:29 am (UTC)
Love it!~ And Junsu likes Yoochun huh...? Well I bet Yoochun will fall sooner or later for Junsu :) Junsu is just too lovable; how could Yoochun not love him? :P

Please continue!~ Update soon :)
coke_pie221
Jan. 4th, 2009 05:47 am (UTC)
omg, this is so much funn<3 XD
haha, yunho's taking advantage of this to get closer to jae~
and i hope su makes chun eat his words,,
this fic has me so attacheddd<3 XD
jaehosuminchun
Jan. 4th, 2009 12:27 pm (UTC)
omo.. i just say your story by accident.. and im glad i did.. update soon.. haha!
XDDDD
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