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THE GAME : CHAPTER THREE : SELF CONTROL

Author: Indri AKA Sakura_bloom AKA Vanity_Above
Title: THE GAME
Pairings: YunJae / YooSu [expect the unexpected]
Ratings: NC 17 [OMG 0_0] just to be safe.
Length: 3 /?
Genre: Angst, romance, fluff, smex (//0_0//)
Summary:

Each and everyone of them would have moaned louder, complained better, moved faster, if they had known the dangers the game could come forth with. If they had known, there are things better kept as secrets, desires better remained as fantasies, places better stayed unexplored, words better left untold and pleasures better off unknown.

Only if they had known.

Obviously

They didn't know.

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THE GAME : PROLOGUE :
http://vanity-above.livejournal.com/7212.html#cutid1

THE GAME : CHAPTER ONE : LET THE GAME BEGIN
http://vanity-above.livejournal.com/7645.html#cutid1

THE GAME : CHAPTER TWO : FEELINGS
http://vanity-above.livejournal.com/7907.html#cutid1





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"Alright" Changmin clapped his hands once to grab the attention of the other four men in the room. "Now we shall begin the real thing" He silently laughed at the nervous expression all three of his hyung shared. Yup, all three, Yunho was smiling like an idiot by himself.

They have been anticipating that moment throughout the day, but now that they were actually standing in their living room after a nice dinner and a fresh shower, they , except for Yunho of course, wanted nothing more but to run away. They were all wearing their pyjamas, except for Jaejoong who wore nothing but Yunho's white shirt that was too big for him and a boxer, and they wanted no more than to get the game done with and sleep.

"So who's going first?" Changmin asked enthusiastically.

"We are" Yunho raised his right hand eagerly while his left hand encircled itself around Jaejoong's tiny waist and pulled him closer. "Right Boo?" Yunho smiled at Jaejoong who crossed his arms and mumbled an unenthusiastic 'mhm' as a reply.

"Great!" Changmin smiled. "So Yoosu prepare yourself. You guys are going to play in about ten minutes."

"Why so fast?" Junsu asked thinking that a blow job should at least take around ten minutes and then they still had to cuddle .

"Oh don't worry."Changmin smiled. "Jaejoong has got quite a reputation with his skills on the subject of oral sex, and I don't need to check on them cuddling. Seriously, we all know how much of a cuddling king Yunho is." Changmin spoke out the truth and proceeded to collect the paper he placed on the table earlier and followed Yunho and Jaejoong to their room.

Once the three were out of sight Yoochun turned to face Junsu. Junsu flinched at the sudden attention.

"Remember what we talked about yesterday" Yoochun's voice low and cold. "Don't try anything stupid, as good as you are at giving heads, I'm not going to fall in love with you.The only reason I let that happened was because I was drunk and didn't know what I was doing. So you shouldn't hope for anything from me."

"I understand." Junsu replied calmly. "I won't hope for anything" Junsu forced a fake smile. Yoochun was right. Just because Yoochun didn't push him away that night, didn't mean that he should put his hopes up.

"Good that you understand, so tonight we bett-" Yoochun's sentence was cut off by the sudden melody of Pussycat Doll's 'Don't Cha' that came out of Junsu's pocket.

"Sorry" Junsu apologized and fished for his cellphone. He was so nervous and thankful for the sudden interruption that he didn't bother to see the caller id. He flipped the phone and received the call. "Hallo" Junsu greeted, his voice smooth yet husky. Yoochun could hear faintly the voice of the man from the other line. "Hey" Junsu smiled and laughed nervously. He looked at Yoochun briefly and mouthed 'I'll talk to you later' to Yoochun before he turned away. "No no no, I wasn't busy at all."

Yoochun eyed Junsu suspiciously and couldn't help but to be curious about the caller. Junsu had only a few friends, his best being his own twin brother and the next is his elementary friend Eun Hyuk, a guy from another group called Super Junior. But lately, Junsu had been close to another guy that Yoochun didn't have any idea about. He even heard rumours about them going on some dates, and that irritated him. Not because he was jealous, so he insisted, but it was just annoying how Junsu is close with some random guys and would probably play around with him in no time. The thought of it sickened him, the thought of a sluttish Junsu.

Seriously, he never thought he was ever that judgemental before.

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"So who's going first?" Changmin asked sitting himself down on a chair at the side of the bed. Yunho was already lying on the bed. Topless. While Jaejoong was sitting in front of him, at the gap of his already spread legs.

"Are you seriously going to sit there and watch us?" Jaejoong raised his eyebrow.

"Duh" Changmin replied as if it was the most obvious thing in the world. "This is the best position. I get to see you guys giving me live porn from the best angle" Changmin smiled.

"If you say so" Jaejoong smiled sarcastically still uncomfortable.

"Boo do you want to go first?" Yunho asked sweetly, hands already on Jaejoong's waist, rubbing between the shirt and Jaejoong's skin.

"Giving you a blow job?" Jaejoong asked hesitantly. He really wasn't all that excited about giving Yunho a blow job for the game .

"Yeah, since you're all nervous about it, so it's better if you get it over and done with." Yunho smiled.

"Okay" Jaejoong replied with a worried sigh.

"Don't worry Boo" Yunho gave Jaejoong a quick peck on his forehead. "I'll try my best not to go wild" Yunho reassured jokingly earning a small laughter from Jaejoong.

Jaejoong slowly slide down to his position . He pulled Yunho's pyjama bottom with shaky hands. He was quite shocked that Yunho didn't have any underwear underneath, he should have known, that was why Yunho didn't have a lot of underwear to wash. Jaejoong gulped at the sight of Yunho's already half aroused member.

"Sorry Boo, you look pretty sexy in that shirt, couldn't help but to be a bit excited" Yunho smiled apologetically again earning sweet laughters from Jaejoong.

Jaejoong took a deep breath and lowered his head ready to take Yunho's member in his mouth. But right when he was about to go for it,

"Wait Boo" Yunho shifted. "Let me make myself a bit more comfortable" Yunho knew that if he wasn't in a stable enough position, he would go absolutely crazy once his member made any kind of contact with Jaejoong's mouth. No one could blame him, after all he had experienced the magic of those sinful mouth.

After Yunho shifted to a more comfortable position, Jaejoong proceed with his challenge. Changmin licked his lips, unreasonably nervous with the scene. Jaejoong supported himself with his elbow and lowered his head.

"Wait" Yunho called out once more causing Changmin to flinched in irritation. "Maybe I should I sit a bit higher" Yunho moved up the bed secretly holding the bed post as a support.

Jaejoong moved up and again went to his position. He cleared his throat and took a deep breath. He lowered his head and,

"Wait!"

"OH WILL YOU JUST SHUT UP!" Changmin shouted in frustration. He too had an arousing member to deal with.

"Okay. Geez Changmin, talk about those anger management classes you've been taking" Yunho stuck his tongue out and shut his mouth.

Jaejoong bit his lips and took a deep breath. In his head there was only one determination, and that was to give his best friend a fucking blow job and sleep.

He lowered his head once again and took hold of Yunho's base firmly with his right hand. At the sudden contact Yunho flinched and let out a small sigh. Jaejoong opened his mouth slightly and started off by giving Yunho's member a good lick at the tip.

"Oh fuck" Yunho cursed trying to control himself at the wet and soft sensation of Jaejoong's tongue.

Jaejoong continued by giving a couple more lick at the tip which was heaven and hell for Yunho. Yunho tried biting his hands to keep the noise down but when Jaejoong bit his tip softly he groaned aloud making sure Jaejoong understood just how much trouble Yunho had keeping himself in control. Jaejoong opened his mouth wider, lowered himself as he took Yunho's member into his mouth slowly, causing Yunho to whimper at the painful speed.

"Jae- I ...........ahh... Gawd" Yunho groaned gripping stronger onto the bed posts as Jaejoong's mouth moved up and down his length. "Jae.....please" Yunho couldn't take it when Jaejoong purposely mumbled as he suck just to create vibration. "Don't do that Boo.... please..... OH FUCK!" Yunho screamed when Jaejoong unexpectedly sucked his member harder.

He silently praised himself for having a good control over his body and not raped Jaejoong right then and there. Jaejoong proceeded by licking Yunho's length top to bottom making sure that when he reached the tip he licked the pre-cum clean, at the sinful movement Jaejoong's tongue performed ,Yunho moaned loudly.

At this moment Changmin was having trouble keeping himself from wetting his pants. His hands was in between his thigh covering his still clothed aching member. He couldn't jerk of there in front of his hyungs. That is so not Shim Changmin like. He may be perverted, but his cool image was something that had never failed him.

Meanwhile, Jaejoong opened his mouth once again and engulfed Yunho's length in his mouth. This time he sucked more firmly, with more velocity, earning more moans and groans of pleasure.

"Jae Boo I'm going to come" Yunho announced. He knew just how much Jaejoong hated having to swallow random semen. Jaejoong parted his mouth from Yunho's member at the announcement.

"Changmin it's okay if I don't swallow right?" Jaejoong asked Changmin who seemed to be dying with his demanding member.

"Yup that's fine" Changmin forced a smile trying to hide his pain. "I got to go now, you guys continue cuddling." Changmin stood up awkwardly. "Don't want to keep Yoosu waiting." Changmin smiled and stumbled out of the room.

On the other hand Kim Jaejoong was sitting down in front Yunho, who was stroking his much aroused member. After only a few good stroke he came, unintentionally spraying some of his semen on Jaejoong's thigh.

"Sorry Boo" Yunho sat up breathlessly. "I'll go get a towel to wipe it off, I need to clean myself anyway" Yunho ruffled Jaejoong's hair who just nodded in reply. Jaejoong's eyes followed Yunho's well built figure as he walked to the bathroom. Jaejoong sighed, almost regretting what he did. But he had came to the realization upon seeing Yunho's reaction, that no matter how hard he tried to change Yunho's way of thinking, Yunho would always think of sex like it was a cup of chocolate fudge ice cream with cherry on top. When he finished the ice cream, he would throw the cup away, in the non-recycling bin.

Jaejoong looked up when he heard footsteps approaching his way. He smiled when his eyes met the dark brown pair.

"Let me clean it for you Boo" Yunho sat himself in front of Jaejoong and started wiping his best friend's thigh. "We'll have to cuddle after this."

"Changmin isn't here, we can just not do i-"

"We have to" Yunho cut quickly.

"But"

"No buts"

"Why?"

"Why not?" Yunho stopped wiping. There was silence as he looked into Jaejoong's eyes and for a moment Jaejoong thought he saw hurt.

"Because" Jaejoong answered softly. "Because it doesn't make sense"

"What doesn't?" Yunho asked stubbornly.

"Why would you want to cuddle with me even if you don't HAVE to?" Jaejoong asked, trying to get some sense into his friend's head.

"What's wrong with that?" Yunho asked, irritation apparent in his tone.

"You have a girlfriend" Jaejoong stated hoping that answers Yunho's question. Normal people would have gotten the hint, unfortunately,

"So?" Yunho was only almost normal.

"So you should stop playing around with other people."

"You're not other people . You are Kim Jaejoong, my best friend" Yunho explained gently as he placed the towel on the side table having finished cleaning Jaejoong's thigh.

"But still..." Jaejoong trailed off unable to give another excuse.

"You just don't want to cuddle with me don't you?" Yunho asked solemnly.

"No" Jaejoong raised his hand to caress Yunho's cheek. "It's not like that"

"Then you'd cuddle with me?" Yunho pouted.

"Geez" Jaejoong shook his head playfully. "You're such a cuddle freak" Jaejoong leaned forward and gave Yunho a light peck on the lips. But he couldn't get back to his position as Yunho pulled him into a hug and gently laid Jaejoong beside him. "Yunho" Jaejoong pouted confused.

"Yes Boo?" Yunho responded, his right arm placed above Jaejoong's head supporting the weight of his body as his head hovered on top of Jaejoong's face smiling at the beauty.

"If you keep starring at me you might fall for me you know" Jaejoong teased instead of the initial intention of asking Yunho what the hell he was doing. Because Yunho's smile somehow made him forgot.

"No way" Yunho replied with an exaggerated gasp. "But I thought you fell for me first" Yunho joked as his left hand traveled to Jaejoong's hips, making its way underneath the shirt and gently caressing Jaejoong's soft skin.

"No way" Jaejoong laughed. "I don't like players" Jaejoong stuck his tongue out.

Yunho smiled and kissed Jaejoong on the lips. Unlike the usual peck they shared, this time he kissed him for real. More demanding, more intense, and Jaejoong swore his heart stopped beating for a second, before he closed his eyes enjoying the sensation of Yunho's lips upon his.

Yunho kept on moving his hands caressing Jaejong gently, exploring his body. His lips pressing against Jaejoong making sure his best friend knew he wasn't going to let go soon. Jaejoong breathed heavily at the teasing caresses, and flinched slightly when Yunho licked his lips asking for an access. Jaejoong parted his lips hesitantly and allowed Yunho's tongue to explore his mouth.

From gentle kisses into passionate battle of tongues. They stopped when they decided they needed air to breathe. The moment they parted, Jaejoong got his senses back. When Yunho leaned down to capture his lips once again, Jaejoong stopped him, held his head, preventing the other to come closer.

"I think that's enough" Jaejoong declared with a fake smile.

"Why?" Yunho asked almost sour. He hated moments when Jaejoong act like that, like one PMS-ing bitch.

"Because I said so" Jaejoong answered coldly. Enough of the game, enough of pleasurable confusion. "And besides, we need our rest tonight." Jaejoong pushed Yunho gently to the side, placing him to his own side of the bed. "We have a busy schedule tomorrow."

"Sure" Yunho responded sounding irritated and was indeed feeling so. The reason to his irritation was unknown to him. The feelings he had was complicated, too perplexed for his liking and yet familiar. "Whatever you say princess" He got up from his position and moved to the empty space beside his best friend. "Good night" He uttered after Jaejoong turned the lights off.

"Good night" Jaejoong replied with no hint of emotions in his voice. But if it wasn't as dark as it was, he would have noticed that he almost ripped the blanket from gripping it too hard. Yet at that moment he was too busy fighting in his own head, scolding himself for having gone too far, for having give in to his humanly desire. Although it was all a game, it did not change the fact that he was involved in the game, a participant, and as much as he loved to have fun playing the game, he would have rather end it.

He should have listened to himself.

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"Okay!" Changmin smiled sarcastically as he stood on the side of the bed where two men were seated next to each other with a meter of empty space between them. "Let's start with the basics such as" Changmin inched himself closer to the bed as he spoke "Sitting BESIDE each other instead of the current 'I'm sitting NEXT to you but I don't where the hell you are because you're probably five kilometers away from me' sitting position. Okay?" The two nodded when Changmin gave them 'The Eye' and immediately moved closer to each other. "That's better." Changmin smiled and continued "Now let's begin" He announced and took a chair for him to sit on.

Yoochun tensed up when Junsu moved closer to him, he noticed how Junsu was slightly shaking, and how his movements were hesitant. He thought of how hypocritical it was, considering how Junsu acted that night , and, as he assumed , considering the number of men Junsu had probably fucked. Junsu's facial expression though, was telling otherwise. His eyes worried, his cheeks flushed, and even the almost inaudible sound of his breathing was uneven. It was almost as if he was terrified.

Unknown to Yoochun though, J unsu was hiding his erection. He was way too aroused and too embarrassed to give a blowjob, not just in front of Changmin, but to give it to YOOCHUN in front of Changmin. He was glad that they didn't have to take their clothes of for the moment, so he could easily get away with his arousal. For the moment.

Junsu moved his hands to Yoochun's pants and tried to open the zipper as he trembled. He was about to unzipped the pants when their audience decided to interrupt.

"Wait!" Changmin halted all actions. "There is something that is just not quite right with the scene" Changmin rubbed his chin.

"What?" Yoochun asked nervously as he noticed how Junsu's hands were still lingering on his zipper. Junsu stopped his movement without a protest.

"Oh I know!" Changmin smiled mischievously.

"What?"

"...."

"What?"

"STRIP!"

For once in his life, Junsu wished to see straight porn, Eun Hyuk singing, or vaginas, ANYTHING to turn him off.

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HEY GUYS <3 This is just a Music Video on Queer As Folk, a gay series which I WAS obsessed with a year ago. But thanks to my friend I am back into it XD XD XD Brian and Justin is just too cute together, So I decided to transfer my Fan-girl energy to this <3 Bwahahahaha

I hope you guys like it <3





A/N
So Sorry for the delay guys TT_TT School is killing me, but break is coming soon, so I hope I can work faster :s
But I am so touched by all of your comments <3 <3 It really keeps me going :)
How do you like the QAF video? Geez I LOVE Brian and Justin <3 I mean I got over them a year ago, but now I'm back to my former state "QAF OBSESSED FAN" LOL XD XD XD
I hope you guys like this chapter ^^
And COMMENTS ARE LOVE <3 <3 <3

P.S
Don't bash me for sucky smut TT_TT

Comments

( 45 comments — Leave a comment )
(Anonymous)
Jan. 21st, 2009 01:30 pm (UTC)
i think yunho's got issues. he's confusing poor jae! T_T
and haha, yoochun is in denial. he's jealous already. =P but poor junsu, he looks like he's suffering so much.
simply_min
Jan. 21st, 2009 01:31 pm (UTC)
eh, that was me above. heh...
chameron_xx
Jan. 21st, 2009 01:40 pm (UTC)
GAH. I MISS THIS FIC! THANK GOD YOU UPDATED I THOUGHT I WOULD GO SMUT-DEPRIVED :] goes read
chameron_xx
Jan. 21st, 2009 02:09 pm (UTC)
I shan't bash you for your bad(ACTUALLY WAS REALLY HOT) smut :] BUT FOR : I WANT THE NEXT CHAPT!!

IB kills....this just made my day...cept now I'm screwed for my Physics test T_T -eeep-

Can't wait till Yunho dumps his gf >< honestly. lol
applepieprinces
Jan. 21st, 2009 01:55 pm (UTC)
DUUUDE. i peed my pants. this is soo filled with excitement woohoo. see im back in lj for this♥ will give a proper comment soon i need to wake up at 3am. school stuff i miss you
jinsane226
Jan. 21st, 2009 02:08 pm (UTC)
wow, O.O Jae is very skilled XD
Though I feel sorry for Junsu, it seems as though if Yoochun saw Junsu's state he'd belittle him further
juhli
Jan. 21st, 2009 02:26 pm (UTC)
i don't know, but i kind of dislike ynho in tihs fic...how he's always says "boo" to jae while having a boyfriend...kseothu, poor jaejoong :/

yoosu is...akward xD
yoosulover89
Jan. 21st, 2009 02:48 pm (UTC)
I'm so glad you updated!! :D
I feel so sad for both JJ and Junsu, they're probably gonna hurt the most later on.
I'm expecting the next chapter already!! =DD
changminlover
Jan. 21st, 2009 02:55 pm (UTC)
Yunho is such a player. He got a girlfren but play with Jae at the same time. Poor jae~~
And Yoochun is very harsh to Junsu.
Changmin~~~ *sigh* He kinda used his intelligence in the wrong way.. keke... ^^
Update soon~~~~~
tvxqlover84
Jan. 21st, 2009 03:01 pm (UTC)
I used to watch that series too, a few years ago and loved that couple. I was never able to watch the end if it ended already.
About the fic, darn Yunho is asking for too much without realizing that he is playing with fire, he is surely to get burn.
Yoochun is annoying, yes yes, he is not gay, he doesnt like Junsu... yeah yeah... anyway feeling jealous and thinking about how many men Junsu have been with, dude! lol
Poor Su though, he is gonna suffer a lot.
nericia
Jan. 21st, 2009 03:53 pm (UTC)
Ahh why is Chun so mean against Su?? He is just a coward I think . He lived something with Su but he can't accept it! Poor Su :(
What about Yunho??? He is palying with Jaejae :(
But the blow job scene was great honey! I really wonder what's gonna happen next in this story. I guess Yunho and Chun will end up falling in love ! (I hope so!) I wanna see them crying from love heheh :)
anime76
Jan. 21st, 2009 04:33 pm (UTC)
ah... one sided love from both couples. One side you have an oblivious Yunho & on the other is an obnoxious homophobic Chunnie. Which should i pity more Jae or Su.... Can foresee a long road ahead of them.
vrilly
Jan. 21st, 2009 05:21 pm (UTC)
ASDKLDSKLKLSDKLSLDLDSLK MOAR SOON? ♥
jaesa2617
Jan. 21st, 2009 05:40 pm (UTC)
yunnie doesnt know his "real" feelings towards jae!! oh su. poor thing. min is so evil! just when su thot he cld get away min asked them to strip LOL.
snow2kiss
Jan. 21st, 2009 06:43 pm (UTC)
hmm...I think yun knows his feeling towards jae(actions in this chapter)...the reason he acts like that I don't know(actions in previous chapters) but I have the feeling that yun knows his feeling & jae's feeling too...
chun is soooo mean...still mean...he's obviously jealous & still in denial =_____="
poor su T_____T jae too
hana_cho
Jan. 21st, 2009 06:50 pm (UTC)
lol the last sentence, but you are right eun hyuk is a really off turner when he sings. My poor ears.

I'm so sorry for Jae and Su. Yunho is so stupid. And Yoochun is such a jerk.

please update soon ^^
crystaldee
Jan. 21st, 2009 06:52 pm (UTC)
Geez YunHo...
You're sure an ass... XDDDD

Ommo..
Chunnie...stil in denial land... ^__^

Aigoo Minnie...
Fufufufuffu....


OMG! THAT VIDEO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!
The collection of their kissing!!!!!!!!!!
GYAH!!
I want to keep it!!! XDDDDD
You have the DL-able version? The HQ version, maybe? Kekekekekek...
I'm an obssessed fan of QAF too!! XDDD
Love the BriJus couple.. ^__^
haru_ran
Jan. 21st, 2009 07:21 pm (UTC)
woooooooh~~~~ the next part +YAY+YAY+YAY+
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D: poor Susu .... Chunnie is soo mean >___<

"This is the best position. I get to see you guys giving me live porn from the best angle"
wanna see too xDDDD

"Wait!" "OH WILL YOU JUST SHUT UP!"
gaaaaaaaah!!! Yunho! I have to admit that Changmin is totally right! Don't say 'wait' anymore! or else I have to slap you -.-

aaaaaaaaaaw~~~~ YunJae kissing <3<3<3<3<3 ..... it's totally obvious who Yunho loves the most ;3 xDDDD

"STRIP!" For once in his life, Junsu wished to see straight porn, Eun Hyuk singing, or vaginas, ANYTHING to turn him off.
O____O *bwahahahahahaha* Changmin you're so cruel xDDDD
poor little Susu .... can't escape his erection ;3

waaaaaaaah~~~~ need the next part >__<
please update soon *smooches*
usagi_bara
Jan. 21st, 2009 09:10 pm (UTC)
I'm so glad you updated!

Man! Yoochun is really an ass annoying!

He's so in denial.

Poor Su though ;_____________;


More soon?

<3~
mairasm
Jan. 21st, 2009 10:43 pm (UTC)
I feel so sorry for Junsu... Yoochun's got it all wrong!!!
But the Yunjae part was so perfect, how can you say you didnt write smut well???
Cant wait for the next part!!!
<33333
padmik
Jan. 21st, 2009 11:14 pm (UTC)
straight porn, eunhyuk singing, and vagines turn junsu off XD but poor boy. Yoochun is so in denial. He has that flashing green sign over his head blinking DENIAL DENIAL.

and Yunho, I can't decided whether he knows his true feelings towards Jae or not. He's gonna push Jae over the edge. I can already see it.
kiyazawa
Jan. 21st, 2009 11:28 pm (UTC)
0MG..0MG!! @.@ its H0T!! Im t0tally g0ing t0 be pervy-0ne after read this!! >.
alex202
Jan. 22nd, 2009 12:47 am (UTC)
Wow~ YunJae is HOT !!
alex202
Jan. 22nd, 2009 12:48 am (UTC)
"Yunho would always think of sex like it was a cup of chocolate fudge ice cream with cherry on top. When he finished the ice cream, he would throw the cup away, in the non-recycling bin."

Let's see in the end of the game , Yunho will change his point of view about SEX or not ~

I'm waiting ! XD
akameluver716
Jan. 22nd, 2009 01:24 am (UTC)
yay update!!! and no worries about the delay...schools pretty much killing off tons of people right now xD

anyways, changmin is such perv (in a good way!!!!! :DDD) !!! and wow for the yunjae!!!!! looking forward to the yoosu!!! :DD
coke_pie221
Jan. 22nd, 2009 02:45 am (UTC)
haha. yunho's rather,, interesting o,o..
and poor jae, he doesn't know what to think XP
WHAI NO YOOSU ACTION YET!?!?
gahh, damn cliffhanger. T^T
anyways,, can't w8 for more<3333
eiira
Jan. 22nd, 2009 04:56 am (UTC)
yay!! an update!! I think Yunho likes Jae and wants to be with him but doesnt know it!!! and poor jae! hes so confused!! and I cant wait for next part!!! totally loved this one!! thanx!
aitsukame
Jan. 22nd, 2009 12:56 pm (UTC)
i have waited for this!! thanks for the update anyways!!

for some reason i hate both yunho and yoochun here
T T
jaegiya
Jan. 22nd, 2009 01:50 pm (UTC)
Oh fuck ..

Can't say anything much but CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER SMQISMIOQEOWQOEJWOQ

I hope there'll be moar?
As in .. Moar hot? 8D HAHAHAH
sae_chan
Jan. 22nd, 2009 03:56 pm (UTC)
Yunnie...you player. ><
Chunnie's already feeling jealous!! XDDD But I wanna know who the guy is as well!
You're a QAF fan??! OMG! Me too!!! I was into it a few years back, then got out of the fandom coz I couldn't download the episodes and all, but I'm back in again after reading a Brian/Justin fic and now I'm downloading all the episodes to watch!! I love love love QAF!!! Which episode have you watched till?
nivani
Jan. 22nd, 2009 10:16 pm (UTC)
YOOCHUN THAT HYPOCRITE BITCH!!

*coughcough* not to get carried away...

I'm gonna drop you a proper comment when my brain will start function again *headddesk*
vanillaicex3
Jan. 22nd, 2009 11:23 pm (UTC)
T___T. Poor Jaejoongie -pets-
LOL, Poor Junsu... X).
jelleus
Jan. 23rd, 2009 08:31 am (UTC)
you updated! at last! i miss this very badly!
kami_no_kami
Jan. 23rd, 2009 09:40 am (UTC)
Dang. I love the YunJae challenge<333 I LOVE IT!!

Can't wait for the YooSu challenge

OmO! I was a QAF OBSESSED FAN TOO!!! but since I've watched all seasons, I'm good now. Watching the video---I remembered all the great times, but I clearly remember season 3 where they broke up and got back together in the end. I was so happy O3O That's also when Ben came for Michael.

Aaaah!! The smut was good >3< I like it!!!!

Please keep writing. *claps*
seanix6amp
Jan. 24th, 2009 06:43 am (UTC)
I just saw this and read all 3 chapters. I"M ADDICTED!

Wasn't Jae supposed to give Yunho a hand job instead? The challenge said 'give each other a hnad job', I wanted to know what Yunho would do to Jae.. *mind in gutter*
But no complaints about the blow job!

Waiting to see the Yoosu part next!
alex202
Feb. 7th, 2009 11:31 pm (UTC)
Where have you been ???

I miss your update :((

vanity_above
Feb. 23rd, 2009 11:20 pm (UTC)
hey babes <3
sorry :s lately I've been busy with work ...
but I'll try to update asap and I'll dedicate it fo you again <3 <3
sorry :s
alex202
Feb. 24th, 2009 11:34 pm (UTC)
I'll wait for you ! <3
h_e_n_j_i_n
Jun. 28th, 2009 07:16 am (UTC)
I must be embarassing to "perform" in front of another person. Especially a friend. I wonder what Changmin gets out of this? But I agree that watching live porn is a great motivation XD
supersonicjaz
Sep. 13th, 2009 08:33 am (UTC)
are you updating any time soon? :DDD
topazy
Sep. 16th, 2009 12:14 pm (UTC)
hey i know you last updated this fic in jan but is there any chance you could continue with this story? i really like it!!! *_*
ting5
Oct. 21st, 2009 02:58 am (UTC)
i stumbled upon this and am thinking will you be updating/continuing this fic??
rinmi
Feb. 5th, 2011 06:20 am (UTC)
hah yoochun n yun seems to see woman as objects n sex as nothing more than that =P haha oh how the games will mess them up.... i want to see hehe. the QAF vid is nice.
sly_heiress
Mar. 10th, 2011 03:30 pm (UTC)
omg. why stop here??? /cries
caramelorange
Feb. 3rd, 2012 06:04 pm (UTC)
HI. I'm commenting this in 2012, a little late haha. I know chances are very slim but I still must ask this!! Are there any chances that you'll be continuing this?? T___T i really wish to see how their relationships will progress...~~

Pretty pleaseeee? <3
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